From 9e90454cc7b3844db3013d87f5b1d7689b735144 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Brian Picciano <mediocregopher@gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 3 Nov 2022 18:50:12 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] Edits from Kelly

---
 index.html    | 16 ++++++++--------
 resume++.html | 32 ++++++++++++++++----------------
 2 files changed, 24 insertions(+), 24 deletions(-)

diff --git a/index.html b/index.html
index 7e2f35a..3b87185 100644
--- a/index.html
+++ b/index.html
@@ -79,7 +79,7 @@
                 <div class="four columns">
                     <p>
                       <em>7+ years</em> of experience working remotely as a
-                      developer. Well-versed in communicating over slack, zoom,
+                      developer. Well-versed in communicating over Slack, Zoom,
                       and email, and in maintaining good working relationships
                       across large timezone differences.
                     </p>
@@ -87,7 +87,7 @@
                 <div class="eight columns">
                     <p>
                       I also have past experience with many other languages and
-                      tools which I could easily pick back up.
+                      tools that I could easily pick back up.
                     </p>
                 </div>
             </div>
@@ -162,16 +162,16 @@
 
                         <li>
                         Implemented a custom, dc-aware service discovery system
-                        for our microservices based app, using Etcd &amp;
+                        for our microservices-based app, using Etcd &amp;
                         SkyDNS. Included health checking, metrics,
                         rolling-restarts, and more.
                         </li>
 
                         <li>
-                        Designed Go-based framework for implementing
-                        microservices which automatically handled configuration,
-                        logging, health checks, metrics, RPC/service discovery,
-                        and more.
+                        Designed a Go-based framework for implementing
+                        microservices, which automatically handled
+                        configuration, logging, health checks, metrics,
+                        RPC/service discovery, and more.
                         </li>
 
                         <li>
@@ -212,7 +212,7 @@
                         </li>
 
                         <li>
-                        Designed and implemented Feeds feature using PHP and
+                        Designed and implemented the Feeds feature using PHP and
                         Mongo, where users could see the recent listening
                         activites of their friends in a Facebook-like feed.
                         </li>
diff --git a/resume++.html b/resume++.html
index aaca493..712183e 100644
--- a/resume++.html
+++ b/resume++.html
@@ -80,7 +80,7 @@
                 <div class="four columns">
                     <p>
                       <em>7+ years</em> of experience working remotely as a
-                      developer. Well-versed in communicating over slack, zoom,
+                      developer. Well-versed in communicating over Slack, Zoom,
                       and email, and in maintaining good working relationships
                       across large timezone differences.
                     </p>
@@ -88,7 +88,7 @@
                 <div class="eight columns">
                     <p>
                       I also have past experience with many other languages and
-                      tools which I could easily pick back up.
+                      tools that I could easily pick back up.
                     </p>
                 </div>
             </div>
@@ -156,16 +156,16 @@
                 <div class="eight columns">
                     <ul>
                         <li>
-                        As BE dev lead of 4-person accounts/payments sub-team,
-                        responsible for:
+                        As a BE dev lead of a 4-person accounts/payments
+                        sub-team, responsible for:
                           <ul>
                             <li>
                             Architecture design, proposals, standards,
                             documentation, and JIRA tickets.
                             </li>
                             <li>
-                            One-on-ones and evaluation of all team members, as
-                            well as hiring of new team members.
+                            One-on-ones and evaluations of all team members, as
+                            well as the hiring of new team members.
                             </li>
                             <li>
                             Code reviews, deployments, and, occasionally, even
@@ -179,25 +179,25 @@
                             from a monolith into microservices.
                             </li>
                             <li>
-                            Migration to JWT-based authentication/session
+                            Migration to a JWT-based authentication/session
                             system.
                             </li>
                             <li>
-                            "Magic button", a project to funnel Kraken users
+                            "Magic button," a project to funnel Kraken users
                             into CW while pre-installing API keys into their
                             account.
                             </li>
                           </ul>
                         </li>
                         <li>
-                        Worked with Kraken security team to triage and fix a
+                        Worked with the Kraken security team to triage and fix a
                         large portion of security issues brought up during
                         audits and bug bounties. Included addition of
                         proof-of-work checks to many sensitive endpoints and
                         complete overhaul of how settings were stored.
                         </li>
                         <li>
-                        Designed and implemented alerts platform, capable of
+                        Designed and implemented an alerts platform capable of
                         alerting users based on arbitrary complex rulesets.
                         </li>
                     </ul>
@@ -230,16 +230,16 @@
 
                         <li>
                         Implemented a custom, dc-aware service discovery system
-                        for our microservices based app, using Etcd &amp;
+                        for our microservices-based app, using Etcd &amp;
                         SkyDNS. Included health checking, metrics,
                         rolling-restarts, and more.
                         </li>
 
                         <li>
-                        Designed Go-based framework for implementing
-                        microservices which automatically handled configuration,
-                        logging, health checks, metrics, RPC/service discovery,
-                        and more.
+                        Designed a Go-based framework for implementing
+                        microservices, which automatically handled
+                        configuration, logging, health checks, metrics,
+                        RPC/service discovery, and more.
                         </li>
 
                         <li>
@@ -280,7 +280,7 @@
                         </li>
 
                         <li>
-                        Designed and implemented Feeds feature using PHP and
+                        Designed and implemented the Feeds feature using PHP and
                         Mongo, where users could see the recent listening
                         activites of their friends in a Facebook-like feed.
                         </li>