More polish to the interface, grammar edits from Kelly

src/service/http.rs

@@ -263,6 +263,7 @@ impl Service {
             dns_records: &'a [service::ConfigDNSRecord],
             challenge_token: String,
 
+            dns_records_have_more_than_one: bool,
             dns_records_have_cname: bool,
         }
 
@@ -304,6 +305,7 @@ impl Service {
                 dns_records: &self.config.dns_records,
                 challenge_token: settings_hash,
 
+                dns_records_have_more_than_one: self.config.dns_records.len() > 1,
                 dns_records_have_cname,
             },
         )
@@ -345,13 +347,13 @@ impl Service {
             }
 
             Err(domain::manager::SyncWithSettingsError::InvalidURL) => (Some(
-                "Fetching the git repository failed, please double check that you input the correct
+                "Fetching the git repository failed; please double check that you input the correct
                 URL."
                     .to_string(),
             ), false),
 
             Err(domain::manager::SyncWithSettingsError::InvalidBranchName) => (Some(
-                "The git repository does not have a branch of the given name, please double check
+                "The git repository does not have a branch of the given name; please double check
                 that you input the correct name."
                     .to_string(),
             ), false),

src/service/http/tpl/domain.html

@@ -4,20 +4,22 @@
 
 {{# if data.settings }}
 
-<p>Your domain <code>{{ data.domain }}</code> is already configured with
+<p>
-Domani. You can see the existing configuration below. If you modify any values
+Your domain <code>{{ data.domain }}</code> is already configured using the
-you will need to hit the "Next" button to complete the update.</p>
+settings shown below. To save any changes you make here, you will need to hit
+the "Next" button and follow the subsequent instructions.
+</p>
 
 {{ else }}
 
-<p>Your domain <code>{{ data.domain }}</code> is not yet configured with Domani.
+<p>
-To get started, please input the details of a public git repo which will be used
+Your domain <code>{{ data.domain }}</code> is not yet configured. Please input
-to serve your domain. When you update the given branch, your domain will be
+the details of a public git repo, which will be used to serve your domain.
-automatically updated too!</p>
+</p>
 
 {{/if}}
 
-<p><em>In the future Domani will support more backends than just git
+<p><em>In the future, Domani will support more backends than just git
     repos.</em></p>
 
 <form method="{{ form_method }}" action="/domain_init.html">
@@ -54,7 +56,7 @@ automatically updated too!</p>
 
     <p>
     <label>
-    Directory or sub-directory to serve files from:
+    Sub-directory from which to serve files:
     <input name="domain_setting_add_path_prefix"
            type="text"
            placeholder="directory/sub-directory"

src/service/http/tpl/domain_init.html

@@ -1,7 +1,9 @@
 <h2>Configure Your Nameserver</h2>
 
-<p>This step requires a passphrase that has been given to you by the
+<p>
-administrator of the Domani server:</p>
+This step requires a passphrase that has been given to you by the administrator
+of the Domani server:
+</p>
 
 <form method="{{ form_method }}" action="/domain_sync.html" id="syncForm">
   <input name="domain" type="hidden" value="{{ data.domain }}" />
@@ -18,9 +20,11 @@ administrator of the Domani server:</p>
 
 </form>
 
-<p>Next you will need to configure your nameserver to point to Domani. There are
+<p>
+Next, you will need to configure your nameserver to point to Domani. There are
 two entries you will need to add. The first entry tells the Domani server that
-it is allowed to serve this domain with your given configuration:</p>
+it is allowed to serve this domain with your given configuration:
+</p>
 
 <table>
   <tr>
@@ -35,8 +39,15 @@ it is allowed to serve this domain with your given configuration:</p>
   </tr>
 </table>
 
-<p>The second entry ensures that other users find the Domani server when they
+<p>
-query for your domain name. It can be <strong>one or more of</strong>:</p>
+The second entry ensures that other users find the Domani server when they
+query for your domain name.
+
+{{ #if data.dns_records_have_more_than_one }}
+It can be any of these:
+{{ /if }}
+
+</p>
 
 <table>
   <tr>
@@ -59,13 +70,17 @@ query for your domain name. It can be <strong>one or more of</strong>:</p>
 </table>
 
 {{ #if data.dns_records_have_cname }}
-<p>(Please note that not all nameserver support using a CNAME in all cases,
+<p>
+(Please note that not all nameservers support using a CNAME in all cases,
 while others support it via an alternative record type like ALIAS or ANAME. If
-one of those are available they can be used instead.)</p>
+one of those are available, they can be used instead.)
+</p>
 {{ /if }}
 
-<p>Once both entries are installed, you can hit the following button to check
+<p>
+Once both entries are installed, you can hit the following button to check
 your configuration and set up your domain. Note that this step may take a long
-time to complete, so if nothing happens immediately please don't panic.</p>
+time to complete, so if nothing happens immediately please don't panic.
+</p>
 
 <input type="submit" value="Next" form="syncForm" />

src/service/http/tpl/domains.html

@@ -1,7 +1,9 @@
 <h2>All Domains</h2>
 
-<p>Below are listed all domains which this Domani instance is currently
+<p>
-serving</p>
+These are all the domains that are currently being managed by this Domani
+instance:
+</p>
 
 <ul>
 {{ #each data.domains }}

src/service/http/tpl/index.html

@@ -1,10 +1,10 @@
 
-<p>Domani makes it as easy as possible to host a website on your own domain
+<p>Domani makes it as easy as possible to host a website using your own domain
 name. No account is needed, just two simple steps and you're done!</p>
 
 <h2>Get Started</h2>
 
-<p>Input your domain name below to set it up, or to reconfigure a domain which
+<p>Input your domain name below to set it up, or to reconfigure a domain that
 you have already set up.</p>
 
 <form method="{{ form_method }}" action="/domain.html">
@@ -31,14 +31,16 @@ you have already set up.</p>
 <h2>How It Works</h2>
 
 <p>
-You will direct Domani to serve files from some external backend, for example a
+You will direct Domani to serve files from some external backend, for example, a
 git repository. Domani will handle all the details of generating TLS
 certificates, fetching the files, and serving traffic to your website.
 </p>
 
-<p>To change the content of your website, just change the files in your
+<p>
-configured backend. The changes will be reflected on your website after a short
+To change the content of your website, just change the files in your configured
-refresh period.</p>
+backend. The changes will be reflected on your website after a short refresh
+period.
+</p>
 
 <h3>Gemini Support</h3>
 
@@ -48,17 +50,19 @@ with a focus on content, simplicity, and user-centrism.
 </p>
 
 <p>
-Domani supports both normal websites and gemini capsules, and will serve the
+Domani supports both normal websites and Gemini capsules, and will serve the
-same domain on both protocols at the same time. Getting started with gemini is
+same domain on both protocols at the same time. Getting started with Gemini is
 as simple as creating an <code>index.gmi</code>
 <a href="https://gemini.circumlunar.space/docs/cheatsheet.gmi">gemtext</a> file
 in your backend, and visiting your domain in a
-<a href="https://github.com/kr1sp1n/awesome-gemini#graphical">gemini client</a>.
+<a href="https://github.com/kr1sp1n/awesome-gemini#graphical">Gemini client</a>.
 </p>
 
 <h2>About</h2>
 
-<p>Domani is an open-source project which is designed to be hosted by
+<p>
-individuals for their community of friends and family. By making it super easy
+Domani is an open-source project designed to be hosted by individuals for their
-to set up a domain we can help our non-technical folk own their own slice of
+community of friends and family. By making it super easy to set up a domain, we
-the internet, the way it was always intended.</p>
+can help our non-technical folk own their own slice of the internet, the way it
+was always intended.
+</p>